Post your poems here to be rated.

down4life2k · Post by **down4life2k** » Jan 22 2005 12:21 pm

OH BTW...D rawks that pimp shit...where you at gurl?

Stardust · Post by **Stardust** » Jan 22 2005 02:02 pm

down4life2k wrote:OH BTW...D rawks that pimp shit...where you at gurl?

awwww ty sweetie, but it aint happenin...too shy & u know this

... anyways that last poem you wrote is damn good! Def. the best out of all the ones you wrote imo...

tristefille · Post by **tristefille** » Jan 22 2005 10:56 pm

Stardust wrote:
down4life2k wrote:OH BTW...D rawks that pimp shit...where you at gurl?
awwww ty sweetie, but it aint happenin...too shy & u know this ... anyways that last poem you wrote is damn good! Def. the best out of all the ones you wrote imo...

awww... how schweet.......

J-Baby · Post by **J-Baby** » Jan 23 2005 07:24 pm

I see somebody living life this way))
He talks alot and loves his God. And this is not just forsay))
He says my mind is over easy. And I'm just a kid at play))
The Time is Now. And I seen the light of today))
The DAWN is rising over the streets of Tampa)) Bay))
ANd the brilliance of the light is SO mush greater than grey))

You wander why I can't forsee, the future between you and me//
It's cause I don't live my life on credit, I'm not a much gambler and when it comes to my soul I don't bet it, IN the past I made mistakes and you better beleive I regret it// BUt a mistake is made to be corrected and when you got people screaming in your face it don't work, call me what you will maby I'm a jerk, I keep my heart soft so you know it's gonna hurt// Lets remember one thing , that as you take your stand, there's no greater love to be found)) than the love of CHrist and thats just how I get around.

J-Baby · Post by **J-Baby** » Jan 31 2005 04:30 pm

Lovely Lady)) Lovely Lady)) CAn you make me
The MAn I wanna be,
Lovely Lady)) Lovely Lady)) Can you show me
the man I wanna see the man I used to be,
when I look into the mirror I don;t know what I'm fighting for,
I guesss It was you but you dissapeared and thats the only damn thing that I ever feared,
Lovely Lady)) Lovely Lady)) I want a Baby))
I need someone to hold when times get tough,
I need some one to call when I had enough, of the twist and turns the bruses and burns,
I need someone to hold my hand through green meadows and ferns where the the roses grow and the lililes yern
Lovely Lady)) Lovely Lady)) Can you save me.

l80OSUICIDE · Post by **l80OSUICIDE** » Mar 15 2005 11:32 am

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Apr 1 2005 10:13 am

Damaged goods
Broken and beaten
Quarter of a century
Nothing to show
Unconditional love
Doesn't exist

Larz · Post by **Larz** » Apr 4 2005 03:04 pm

in the constillation of cynigus x1
lurks a mysterious invisable force..........the black hole

six stars of the northern cross
in mourning for their sisters loss
a final flash of glory and light
nevermore to grace the night

Neil Peart

Fernando Martinez · Post by **Fernando Martinez** » Apr 24 2005 08:46 pm

When I fall
I think
About the things that left me behind
Why do things have to end up the way they should not have
I feel like crying every single night
I just wanted to kiss her
And when she did kiss me
It felt as if still
I was lost
Without nothing
Empty and filled with tears
Maybe I should drink up on a beer
Damn

manny is the man · Post by **manny is the man** » Jun 22 2005 11:03 am

It's funny I created this sticky in april and it's still on here.
Way to go guys.
Im proud to have written it.

manny is the man · Post by **manny is the man** » Jun 22 2005 04:21 pm

I guess no replies

Jackie Mackenzie · Post by **Jackie Mackenzie** » Jul 11 2005 05:06 am

Mr. Orange has a poem...

"Nigga RUFF! RUFF! Don't get shot bitch-this nigga got to get rich bitch!-don't get glocked bitch!-this dawg going spank your ass wit a switch!-RUFF! RUFF! Back up hoe you just don't know how to blow-i don't play game especially when freak be leaving stains- All up on my fame-f'n trick sucking d*#k-you don't know how we chow chow do it kid! we came and thats how we did so run a long before you ass gets thrown on concrete-you face tasting my feet-F*CKING HOE!

TrixR4Me · Post by **TrixR4Me** » Aug 14 2005 09:38 am

Sometimes in life
you find a special friend
someone who changes your life
by being a part of it.

Someone who makes you laugh
until you can't stop
someone who makes you believe
that there really is good in this world.

Someone who convinces you
that there is an unlocked door
just waiting for you to open it.

This is forever friendship.
When you're down,
and the world seems dark and empty,
your forever friend lifts you up in spirit
and makes that dark and empty world
suddenly seem dark and full.

Your forever friend gets you through
the hard times, and the sad times,
and the confused times.

If you turn and walk away
your forever friend follows.
If you lose your way,
your forever friend guides you
and cheers you on.

Your forever friend holds your hand
and tells you that
everything is going to be a-okay.
And when you find such a friend,
you'll feel happy and complete,
because you need not worry.

You have a forever friend for life
and forever has no end

EzraFree · Post by **EzraFree** » Aug 27 2005 02:36 pm

you can read all the poems i've ever felt were "finished" on ezrafree.com, but those of you to lazy to click around here's one:

Seam Together

Leave behind the riddles and lures,
Capture my mind with your bedroom doors,
Don’t wake me up if this is a dream,
Don’t spill your cup it will tear at the seem,
Of what it seams…

Together forever alone but not free,
Inhibit exhibits of passionless glee,
Chronological captures installed frame by frame,
Diabolical masters of the frequency gain,
The truth lies in action, silence the ointment,
Great expectation leads to great dissapointment.

E Nation Online :: gr00veboards ::

Post your poems here to be rated.

wow