Question about the POEMS TO BE RATED????

LeLe · Post by **LeLe** » Jul 8 2009 09:26 am

Ok, I’m considering sharing some of mine here. So, are the poems posted here jokes or seriously poetry? No one has even posted one since April 16th, It’s embarrassing enough to share your poetry, ya know…
So tell me????

Larz · Post by **Larz** » Jul 9 2009 06:28 am

Share your soul with us so we can ridicule, I mean review your words of the heart. Did you like my beer poem? It's me.

LeLe · Post by **LeLe** » Jul 9 2009 07:54 am

Larz42 wrote:Share your soul with us so we can ridicule, I mean review your words of the heart. Did you like my beer poem? It's me.

you make me laugh!

JPExpress · Post by **JPExpress** » Jul 13 2009 06:43 am

The cramping is strong
I keep trying to hold it
The poo is set free

Jason_Arclo · Post by **Jason_Arclo** » Jul 13 2009 09:34 am

what I do is just rave.. poetry and rave can coinside, the poems to be rated don't ever get rated so what I do is just rave when I want to write a new poem I just make it out to be a party and if anyone likes it trust me they'll comment if you want to know the rating just judge your self by the veiws and comments.... more veiws the better it is... most the time noone comments anyway.....

Larz · Post by **Larz** » Jul 14 2009 06:12 am

Cheesecake
by Lars

I like to go swimming
with bow-legged women
and swim between their legs
I like to go fishing
with bare breasted women
and wiggle my lure between their bags
Is that so wrong that I put it to song
It may be a mistake but I also like cheesecake
NOW GIVE ME SOME FUCKING CHEESECAKE BITCH!

Jason_Arclo · Post by **Jason_Arclo** » Jul 14 2009 02:16 pm

now that just inapprocriate larz... your defeninitly gonna burn in hell for that one.....

Larz · Post by **Larz** » Jul 15 2009 03:42 am

All I can hope for is that they serve beer in hell.

Jason_Arclo · Post by **Jason_Arclo** » Jul 15 2009 12:50 pm

yea it's called brim stone mixture of sulfur and carbondioxide....

Boyd Westerman · Post by **Boyd Westerman** » Jul 15 2009 02:36 pm

JPExpress wrote:The cramping is strong
I keep trying to hold it
The poo is set free

JP busting out the haiku!

Post by **dandmantra** » Jul 15 2009 02:40 pm

JPExpress wrote:The cramping is strong
I keep trying to hold it
The poo is set free

That is beautiful. Don't waste it. Jenkem forever.

LeLe · Post by **LeLe** » Aug 4 2009 03:54 pm

That “Poo poem” scared me off from posting mine

LeLe · Post by **LeLe** » Sep 8 2009 01:51 pm

no one auctually "rates"

LeLe · Post by **LeLe** » Sep 8 2009 01:53 pm

Lord

My thoughts are my spoken words
They are written on my face.
I am a book.
Write in me and read me
Look at me.
By love I live and by love I thrive
He holds me like a child
Frees me from every one of my fears
He wipes my tears
Reassures me that they are temporary
He is a leader
The one and only.
He gives me strength.
Awaken by his love.
I am reenergized by his gentleness.
And revived by his unfailing compassion
Renewed and treasured, I am in the light once more.
I thank you Lord